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Slow Dance

“Dance with me” he says. She takes his hand And follows him To the middle of the dance floor. He brings her closer to him, Her arms wrap around his neck, His hands upon her waist. She lays her head on his shoulder And sighs a small sigh of contentment. As she inhales she smells his cologne, And smiles; he smells so good. They hold each other And twirl in circles while the song plays And when the song ends, She longs for more. *Please note:* This poem is different from my poem The Dance. This poem was written about me and my boyfriend at prom, while the other was based off of the 1980s movie Dirty Dancing.

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Date: 5/9/2010 12:43:00 PM
It is free verse again...and so very sweet! Light & Love
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Date: 5/3/2010 10:16:00 PM
that was very nicely done
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Date: 5/3/2010 6:08:00 PM
Great job, Katy. It sounds like you had fun at prom. I enjoyed reading this today...night...umm anyways keep up the great work. Love Destiny
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