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SLOW DANCE

This poem was written by a terminally ill young girl in a New York Hospital. It was sent by a medical doctor. Have you ever watched kids on a merry-go-round? Or listened to the rain slapping on the ground? Ever followed a butterfly's erratic flight? Or gazed at the sun into the fading night? You better slow down, don't dance so fast. Time is short, the music won't last. Do you run through each day on the fly? When you ask, “How are you?” Do you hear the reply? When the day is done, do you lie in your bed, with the next hundred chores running through your head? You'd better slow down, don't dance so fast. Time is short, the music won't last. Ever told your child, we'll do it tomorrow? and in your haste not see his sorrow? Ever lost touch, let a good friendship die, cause you never had time To call and say,'Hi', ...You'd better slow down, don't dance so fast. Time is short, the music won't last.. When you run so fast to get somewhere you miss half the fun of getting there. When you worry and hurry through your day it is like an unopened gift . Thrown away. Life is not a race, do take it slower, hear the music, before the song is over. By: David L. Weatherford

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Date: 12/20/2023 5:14:00 PM
this poem touched my heart and soul. Such wonderful thoughts and advice from a dying young girl. We should all heed her words, 'before our song is over.' Thanks for sharing this poem. Have a wonderful evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 12/22/2023 4:52:00 AM
When we are reaching the end of our lives we seem to realize how precious each hour should be, thanks for reading Sara
Date: 12/20/2023 12:46:00 PM
So pure and real…..very beautiful Rose! Debx
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Date: 12/20/2023 3:26:00 PM
Glad you felt the meaning of this one Deb :)
Date: 12/20/2023 6:51:00 AM
Gosh this is so touching!! Dear rose, this made me tear up… slow down, dance slow, time is fleeting.,: sigh. Made me think of the inevitable reality . And thank you for sharing this with us, this truly touched my soul. Much needed thoughts. Sending you light always
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Date: 12/20/2023 3:25:00 PM
Life is short and we need to take each breath with great purpose.

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