Sloth

evading capture
muscle and sinew respond ~
                                         ever so slowly

4/11/2022

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Paula Goldsmith

April 20, 2022 at 10:59 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "sloth" is a creative write. Have a blessed day..........

Andrea Dietrich

April 19, 2022 at 2:50 PM

yours is REALLY good, John. Congrats. Love this one.

Christuraj Alex

April 18, 2022 at 8:58 PM

Slowness is beautifully brought out. Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin

April 18, 2022 at 8:49 AM

John, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute haiku!

Janice Canerdy

April 14, 2022 at 6:56 PM

Yep, you captured the sloooooow sloth, John. Janice

Valsa George

April 14, 2022 at 6:04 AM

How it would be if a cheetah and a sloth take part in a racing contest? When the cheetah reaches the finishing point, the sloth will still be at the starting point ! Well done John !