Sloth

evading capture muscle and sinew respond ~ ever so slowly 4/11/2022 Howmanysyllables.com

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/20/2022 10:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "sloth" is a creative write. Have a blessed day..........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2022 2:50:00 PM

yours is REALLY good, John. Congrats. Love this one.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/18/2022 8:58:00 PM

Slowness is beautifully brought out. Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/18/2022 8:49:00 AM

John, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute haiku!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/14/2022 6:56:00 PM

Yep, you captured the sloooooow sloth, John. Janice

Valsa George

Date: 4/14/2022 6:04:00 AM

How it would be if a cheetah and a sloth take part in a racing contest? When the cheetah reaches the finishing point, the sloth will still be at the starting point ! Well done John !

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/12/2022 2:13:00 PM

ha! well done, john!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/11/2022 7:31:00 PM

Lub... dub... lub... ? ... ? ... dub ... ? ~ Sammy the Snail