Valsa George Poet Rhyme

Sloppy, Slippery Rock

(Parody of Hickory Dickory Dock)

Sloppy, slippery rock
The boy ran up the rock.
The rock shook once.
The boy ran down.
Sloppy, slippery rock

Sloppy, slippery rock
The boy ran up the rock.
The rock shook twice.
The boy ran down.
Sloppy, slippery rock

Sloppy, slippery rock
The boy ran up the rock.
The rock shook thrice.
The boy ran down.
Sloppy, slippery rock

Sloppy, slippery rock
The boy ran up the rock. 
The rock gave way.
The boy lost his sway.
Sloppy, slippery rock

May.15.2023

Mother Goose Grows Up Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Miranda Hawley

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Panagiota Romios May 16, 2023 at 1:59 PM Excellent ,my friend. Such a fun write Pangie

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2023 at 12:32 PM Cute and clever, Valsa! I enjoyed this

Paige Hind May 16, 2023 at 10:00 AM Very clever. This could be a nursery rhyme.

Joanna Daniel May 16, 2023 at 8:06 AM I like this one, Valsa:)

Victor Buhagiar May 16, 2023 at 2:01 AM Loved your nursery rhyme. Well done.

Gershon Wolf May 15, 2023 at 6:13 PM What I really like about this is how, just like 'Mother G.,' that last stanzy is nasty! Good one, Valsa.

Sotto Poet May 15, 2023 at 1:05 PM Excellent submission for the contest Valsa; I hope all is well with you. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day.

Stephan McBride May 15, 2023 at 8:34 AM Love your poem, Happy Mothers Day to you: ) Hope you had a great relaxing day

Tom Cunningham May 15, 2023 at 7:11 AM Great take on the contest theme Valsa, hope you're keeping well. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit May 15, 2023 at 5:33 AM You got the rhythm and delivered on your theme splendidly, Valsa. Best to you.