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Sliver of Heaven

Your whisper
of "Goodnight, Sweetheart," as I slowly surrender 
to twilight slumber---sliver of heaven!

The sound of your "Good Morning," 
at the break of dawn as Morpheus releases 
his hold on me---sliver of heaven!

You, leaping into my arms
and wrapping your legs around my waist.
Your way of welcoming me home---sliver of heaven!

Thoughts and dreams of you 
when you're near or far;
no matter what time of the day---sliver of heaven!

Your soft kisses upon my lips 
and brow, your loving arms, 
warmly enfolding me---sliver of heaven!

The look of sheer love 
in your soulful eyes, bewitching me;
penetrating the core of my soul---sliver of heaven!

Your fingertips
tenderly brushing my skin. Ah, the loveliness 
of your beautiful smile---sliver of heaven!

Glowing in my heart like the sun,
your dulcet words of "I love you" 
as you're leaving my sight---sliver of heaven!

 
Date written and posted: 04/13/2019

STRAND PICK 8, ANY THEME, ANY FORM
Sponsored by Brian Strand (Winner: 1st Place)
Date submitted: 04/15/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/12/2020 3:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win. That is love. Hard to find. Enjoy your win and day...............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/13/2020 6:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paula:-)
Date: 4/11/2020 3:08:00 PM
Your words in depths of love--excellent poetry Edward--enjoyed the tone and flow, especially the various ways love finds sliver of heaven. Congrats on your first place in Brian's contest.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/11/2020 5:23:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Date: 4/11/2020 2:07:00 PM
A truly lovely love poem, Edward! Congrats on your win--and on having such a deep love-- God's greatest gift by far.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/11/2020 5:24:00 PM
Thanks so much, L.J.!:-) Most obliged.
Date: 4/11/2020 12:47:00 PM
Beautifully penned, Edward. I think this is one of my favorites of your romantic poems. Love the defining phrase, "sliver of Heaven" at the end of each stanza. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/11/2020 1:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sam:-) I appreciate your steady support!
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