Sara Jama Poet Haiku

slither

                           spl /
                              / it  
                    s e r p e n t i n e tongues 
                                                                s
                                                               l
                                                                 i
                                                               t
                                                                  h
                                                                e
                                                                  r 
                                                                     in pits of despair ~
                             turns wicked to  
                                                    s t o n e

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thriveni c mysore July 2, 2025 at 7:00 PM aye, aye, lovely write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!! Sara Jama July 5, 2025 at 6:56 AM Thank you very much.

Linda Alice Fowler July 2, 2025 at 7:22 AM Congratulations Sara! :) Sara Jama July 5, 2025 at 6:56 AM Thank you so much.

Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2025 at 11:08 PM Congrats yet again with this gem Sara Jama July 5, 2025 at 6:56 AM Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2025 at 10:09 AM Congrats in Brian's contest. Reminds me of Medusa Sara Jama May 11, 2025 at 10:26 AM Thank you so much. Medusa was definitely the inspiration for the poem.

CayCay Godwin May 9, 2025 at 8:55 PM What a wicked way to format - very cool. And the content was sharp. For a second, I heard a generic Indian voice from a generic old western saying, 'fork tongue.' Enjoyed this bite. CayCay Sara Jama May 11, 2025 at 10:26 AM Thank you so much.