Slipping Into Gray Hours

Soft, moist clay settles on humus of the earth 
Whispering winds brushing drags of my girth
And graveyards dressed in gauze know he is there
While sorrow rips this heart almost, almost bare

If my heart still breaks in a field of tombs
Where my only love sleeps in pale of wombs
I’d rather lie on his arms with my starved eyes
Than slip into hours lonely, choking my sighs

And in this world, I trace my fingers on his name
Sinking into memories now in ashen forms, oh pain
As his laughter engulfs me in silence of graves’ melody
Deaf now in echoes of raked, raked eternity

I stare at roses gray like my ruffled hair strands
Planting seeds in our garden missing a pair of hands
The beats of a daily requiem skips, petals falling
Angels fair, bring me to him on near night calling 


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HGarvey  Daniel Esquire's If I Have a Broken Heart
by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Allison Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 9:51 PM
this really tugs at the heartstrings nette - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Johnson Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Wonderfully done nette. Congratulations on win. Love,Joyce
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July 24, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Nette,, congratulations on your Broken Heart win. **SKAT**
Esquire Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Dear Nette, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Thank-YOU for supporting my Contest: " If I had a Broken Heart " Congratulations, YOU have quilled the exact feelings I was looking for.I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
A. Sharma Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 12:59 AM
Deep and beutiful nette!Congrats on ur superb win!
Villarosa Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 5:14 AM
Substantive message you have written. Deep imagery casting light to its subject. Good luck to the contest. (^_^).
Poet Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 12:59 AM
Very heartfelt write here by you Nette.A great entry to the contest.
Haick Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 7:45 PM
This well-written Rhyme tugs at the heart, Nette. I know HG will love this. Well done! Thanks for stopping by...always appreciated. . Love, Annalise
Sivey Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 4:45 PM
Wow, your writings are so strong and superb in every way, Nette! I just love your intellect and the powerful words you share with us...not to mention your incredible emotions you share, a devotion so fantastic! This is yet another grandiose poem! You are a divine writer! Great Work!!
Henderson Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 3:56 PM
Your words ease my troubled spirit today nette. I thank you. Peace and blessings.
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 2:44 PM
Winner for sure..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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