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Slipping Away

Slipping away... Alone, I watch you slip away. Your eyes flutter open. And then they close. I watch you slowly; slipping away from me. Taking a piece of me as you go. I see your breathing is irregular, your heartbeat slows down.; your pulse is weak. You turn to me, you open your mouth to speak, but there is no voice. A tear rolls down your cheek, you lie there so still, so calm, so peaceful. I watch you, you have left me here.

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Date: 2/9/2016 12:26:00 AM
Elisa, awesome poem. LINDA
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