Slipping Away

moments fray and shred  
          tomorrow folds today; time’s teeth – rounded 
                memories meld a transcendent balm  
                     deeply rubbed by fading voices 

                                  17 Feb 2021 

     Contest, Liberum Divisa 4 sponsor, Gregory R Barden  
     (4 consecutive lines from my poem, “Waiting’s Knife”)
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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 9:21 PM
I knew this would win David. It is simply outstanding. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo
Makama Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 6:13 PM
A big big congratulation to you. This is well deserve, the flow is impeccable.
Ligon Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 12:09 PM
Much depth to this. Congratulations!
Canerdy Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 9:35 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, David. Janice
Krutsinger Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 7:38 PM
Perfect poem. Perfect title.
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