Slipping

Slowly slipping
  around my rose bush
   plump, red tongues
    wet to the ground
  remember the taste
of the high, green stem?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 4, 2012 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals John. Love, Carol
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December 27, 2011 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week John. I wish you the best on your writing endeavors in the new year. Love, Carol
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May 3, 2011 at 5:15 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning. I will be back again soon to read more John. May the sun shine down on you and bring great joy to your life now and always. Love, Carol
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