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Slippery Slope

The wind howls, trees sway and branches creak
Across frozen, snow covered ground
Where ice merges all around
As if life has now found
A slippery slope
On which to cope
While watching
The sun
Set

Heidi Sands

1/15/22

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Paul Callus Date: 1/22/2022 6:43:00 AM Both the content and shape of this poem go hand in hand, Heidi. Lovely imagery and metaphor, too. ~ Warm regards // paul Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/22/2022 6:47:00 AM Thank you Paul. I appreciate your kind feedback. I hope all is well and you have a nice day :)

Quoth Theraven Date: 1/17/2022 9:42:00 PM Heidi, Wherever there's uneven ground or water covered rock. So thankful to find the end of tall days and brilliant sunsets shared. -Richard Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/19/2022 6:05:00 AM Thank you for your input. Enjoy :)

Edward Ibeh Date: 1/17/2022 7:10:00 PM Quite a wonderful Nonet, Heidi:-) Gosh, I can't remember the last time I tried this form! This poem of yours is inspiring enough to give it a whirl once again. Hope all is well. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/19/2022 6:04:00 AM Hi. Edward. I am happy it was inspiring. I hope you do give it a whirl again ! Thank you :)

Timothy Mcguire Date: 1/17/2022 5:46:00 PM Very nice and this can relate to life as well. Keep writing! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/19/2022 6:03:00 AM Thank you Timothy.. Yes it can. I appreciate your support. I hope you have a nice day :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 1/17/2022 5:18:00 PM Cleverly crafted piece. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/19/2022 6:02:00 AM Thank you M.L. :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 1/17/2022 9:07:00 AM Very smartly written Nonet, Heidi. Your poetic prowess on wintertime display. Love and best wishes for the new year, dear friend. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/17/2022 10:17:00 AM Nice to see you Freddie. Thank you for your kind input. I hope you have a great New Year. Love and peace my friend :)

Sotto Poet Date: 1/17/2022 7:22:00 AM Heidi, you've created a stunning winter landscape here! Nature makes the frozen scenes that you describe alleviate the anguish of stormy weather. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/17/2022 7:36:00 AM Thank you very much Lasaad. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope all is well :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2022 6:52:00 AM - Slippery slopes are fun for the kids ... dangerous for grown women :))) ... but, nice to look at ... when the sun is shining and the ice sparkles ... lovely poem, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/17/2022 7:35:00 AM That is true Anne-Lise. Thank you for your input. I hope all is well. Hugs :)

Mike Gentile Date: 1/16/2022 6:52:00 AM This is a beautiful Wintery scene Heidi! A frosty gem !! Happy Sunday xxoo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/16/2022 8:05:00 AM Thank you very much Mike. Happy Sunday :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/15/2022 3:27:00 PM Winds are blowing--getting ready with advanced warning of tomorrow's approaching storm. Nature paints those frozen themes that you describe to ease the pain of storms. Stay safe, Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/15/2022 4:11:00 PM Thank you Vijay. Nature always paints beautiful scenes we can count on. I hope that you stay safe too. Take care, my friend :)