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Slipped Away

slipped away

metallic taste of blood
lingers on my tongue
grieving wine of life

sweet life
flavoured salt and iron
greets a morning 
mourning her loss

anger burns as fire
denial laughs falsely
the clock’s alarms today
yesterday she was here
holding my hand smiling.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/9/2017 9:07:00 AM
This is very sad... Great first line..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/9/2017 9:10:00 AM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 11/8/2017 10:00:00 PM
So sad yet so sweet. Very well crafted.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/8/2017 11:31:00 PM
Thank you Line.

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