Slip of Tongue

I keep secrets 
like other old people 
always do 

In my brown eyes, they borne 
the stirs and sighs of all the things 
I was entrusted, yet today…

this great excitement I felt 
betrays my eyes, revealing 
the discrepancies of my shadow

as I tried to snatch the trust 
of a bird, playing “love me or love me not”  
‘neath the healing mango tree
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Pavlikova Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 7:20 AM
Thanks for comment. how do you know russian word?
Anos Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 5:06 AM
enigmatic, like Poe's! the message is deep though! I think I got it hehehe!
Jordan Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 4:18 AM
Very well written piece you have penned here - very interesting poem - God Bless
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