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Slip of Tongue

I keep secrets like other old people always do In my brown eyes, they borne the stirs and sighs of all the things I was entrusted, yet today… this great excitement I felt betrays my eyes, revealing the discrepancies of my shadow as I tried to snatch the trust of a bird, playing “love me or love me not” ‘neath the healing mango tree

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/14/2008 7:20:00 AM
Thanks for comment. how do you know russian word?
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Date: 9/28/2008 5:06:00 AM
enigmatic, like Poe's! the message is deep though! I think I got it hehehe!
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Date: 9/28/2008 4:18:00 AM
Very well written piece you have penned here - very interesting poem - God Bless
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