George Seal Poet Limerick

Slimming Tm

Once when an overweight boy, named JOE BLOGGS,
    Tried slimming on cornflakes, made by KELLOGGS.
    Then with an APPLE each day,
    To keep DOC MARTIN away.
    Gave up AFTER EIGHT, MCDONALD'S mac dogs.
    
 

    Sponsor Sara Kendrick.
    12 / 24 / 2020.

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Adrienne Spencer January 14, 2021 at 3:31 PM Reminds me of the Puffin poem from long ago. Very clever. Your biggest fan

Sara Kendrick December 31, 2020 at 9:09 AM Reads like the way that most people go with the diet plan. Enjoyed reading your TM work. Thanks for participating in my contest. Sara