Slightly Homogenize Me

Slightly entice me.
Prophesize me.
Sanctify me.
Homogenize me.
Demonize me.
Or just let me be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Bangalee Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 4:10 AM
yeah the last line// love it
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 8:42 AM
I am glad.
Kiser Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 12:07 PM
Clever piece; love it.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 12:52 AM
It was fast and easy and I could see I was going under the tide.
Theraven Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 10:36 PM
Caren, Oh Trixie's friend Stormy, bring back that sunny day. Hope this finds you well. -Richard
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 12:53 AM
I am taking my spirit back, and giving her loads of "me" advice on what to stop taking. Pills are not for us.
Wolf Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:23 PM
Not quite sure of the deeper implications of this monorhyme… (Soup mail, please). Thank you, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:01 AM
I was pretty much "playing". Ha.
Peterson Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 7:29 PM
All the ways and means others employ, failing to recognize we see right through schemes and have no need of them whatsoever. Well composed. I would change just one word to ‘sanctify.’
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:02 AM
I did thanks to your suggestion, Mark. Good eye!
Roper Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 10:01 PM
Great one, Caren,
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:02 AM
Thank you Eve.
Theraven Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 9:04 AM
Caren, I like this Monorhyme 'Slightly Homogenize Me'. As long as we get the whole you and not the 2% stuff. -Richard
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:02 AM
Hilarious!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 7:57 PM
Or just let me be...ah, yes
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:02 AM
"Just let me be" - yes, there is that.
Lee Sr. Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 11:35 AM
really!! Constantly Surprising me Joyishly blessing thee Nice verse James :)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:03 AM
Thank you my friend.
Perrin Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 10:21 AM
I agree, the last line finishes it off perfectly :-) x
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:03 AM
Elaine, this made me happy. Thank you for stopping by!
Vangaveti Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 8:05 AM
The last line is a killer :D
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:03 AM
I like to get my licks in at the end.
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