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Slightly Homogenize Me

Slightly entice me. Prophesize me. Sanctify me. Homogenize me. Demonize me. Or just let me be.

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/21/2019 4:10:00 AM

yeah the last line// love it

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 8:42:00 AM

I am glad.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/20/2019 12:07:00 PM

Clever piece; love it.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 12:52:00 AM

It was fast and easy and I could see I was going under the tide.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/19/2019 10:36:00 PM

Caren, Oh Trixie's friend Stormy, bring back that sunny day. Hope this finds you well. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 12:53:00 AM

I am taking my spirit back, and giving her loads of "me" advice on what to stop taking. Pills are not for us.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/19/2019 8:23:00 PM

Not quite sure of the deeper implications of this monorhyme… (Soup mail, please). Thank you, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 1:01:00 AM

I was pretty much "playing". Ha.

Mark Peterson

Date: 10/19/2019 7:29:00 PM

All the ways and means others employ, failing to recognize we see right through schemes and have no need of them whatsoever. Well composed. I would change just one word to ‘sanctify.’

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 1:02:00 AM

I did thanks to your suggestion, Mark. Good eye!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/18/2019 10:01:00 PM

Great one, Caren,

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 1:02:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/18/2019 9:04:00 AM

Caren, I like this Monorhyme 'Slightly Homogenize Me'. As long as we get the whole you and not the 2% stuff. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 1:02:00 AM

Hilarious!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/17/2019 7:57:00 PM

Or just let me be...ah, yes

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 1:02:00 AM

"Just let me be" - yes, there is that.

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 10/17/2019 11:35:00 AM

really!! Constantly Surprising me Joyishly blessing thee Nice verse James :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 1:03:00 AM

Thank you my friend.

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/17/2019 10:21:00 AM

I agree, the last line finishes it off perfectly :-) x

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 1:03:00 AM

Elaine, this made me happy. Thank you for stopping by!

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 10/17/2019 8:05:00 AM

The last line is a killer :D

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 1:03:00 AM

I like to get my licks in at the end.