Slick

Slick, moisture, refresh
forest floor's seedlings, nurture,
peat loam soil diet


Thanks to Raul Moreno's inspiration:)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 9:59 AM
I love this. Very slick piece, so much description in so little words, good job!
Gass Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 9:53 AM
Great imagery in this perfect Haiku, Doris! Good luck in Rauls' contest with this excellent inspiration! Love, Roibin
Anish Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 8:25 PM
Sweet picture of nature! I like walking in the forest when I can. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Goff Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 5:54 PM
fine tribute, beautiful haiku! Doris!... and thank you so very much for supporting all my writes!.... I will get to all of yours!... I'm soup-lazy at times!... jim
Pickett Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 10:21 AM
Like mother like daughter.... I see the apple never fell.... Wonderful write......:JP]
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 2:55 AM
This one is very descriptive. Soup mail. Keep writing. Mom
Owens Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 6:35 PM
Hey Doris, This is a good one!! Enjoyed reading your poem. Marty
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