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Slick

Slick, moisture, refresh forest floor's seedlings, nurture, peat loam soil diet Thanks to Raul Moreno's inspiration:)

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Date: 10/12/2009 9:59:00 AM
I love this. Very slick piece, so much description in so little words, good job!
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Date: 10/10/2009 9:53:00 AM
Great imagery in this perfect Haiku, Doris! Good luck in Rauls' contest with this excellent inspiration! Love, Roibin
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Date: 10/9/2009 8:25:00 PM
Sweet picture of nature! I like walking in the forest when I can. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/9/2009 5:54:00 PM
fine tribute, beautiful haiku! Doris!... and thank you so very much for supporting all my writes!.... I will get to all of yours!... I'm soup-lazy at times!... jim
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:21:00 AM
Like mother like daughter.... I see the apple never fell.... Wonderful write......:JP]
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Date: 10/8/2009 2:55:00 AM
This one is very descriptive. Soup mail. Keep writing. Mom
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Date: 10/7/2009 6:35:00 PM
Hey Doris, This is a good one!! Enjoyed reading your poem. Marty
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