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Sleepy Red Eyelid

The sun peeps out over the horizon Sleepy red eyelid, un-java-nated... Fiery streaks soon emblazon the sky Caffeine's supreme ~ Full steamy summer's day ahead

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/13/2019 11:07:00 PM

I cannot fathom how the sun can rise every morning and be glowingly happy and yellow bright without coffee. I cannot speak to people in any kind of nice way at all until I have had two cups of it.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2019 12:47:00 PM

The sun, I hear, prefers tea. LOL. ~ gw

Kaveesha Ruwindi

Date: 8/12/2019 10:35:00 PM

Nice work! :) Enjoyed reading this lovely poem.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2019 10:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for the encouragement, Kaveesha! Best wishes, Gershon