Sleepy Red Eyelid

The sun peeps out over the horizon
   Sleepy red eyelid, un-java-nated...
Fiery streaks soon emblazon the sky
   Caffeine's supreme
      ~ Full steamy summer's day ahead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 11:07 PM
I cannot fathom how the sun can rise every morning and be glowingly happy and yellow bright without coffee. I cannot speak to people in any kind of nice way at all until I have had two cups of it.
Wolf Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 12:47 PM
The sun, I hear, prefers tea. LOL. ~ gw
Ruwindi Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Nice work! :) Enjoyed reading this lovely poem.
Wolf Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Thank you so much for the encouragement, Kaveesha! Best wishes, Gershon
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