Sleepy Me

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SLEEPY ME

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, NOON, TODAY, 12 JANUARY 2017, MY PHOTO,

Night kept me close to her heart

Refusing stubbornly to let me go

While day anxiously was awaiting

My self into her arms to throw!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
      12 January 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/18/2017 2:21:00 PM
That's what daydreams are for, I suppose. Lovely poem, Demetrios. Such a romantic dilemma your poem presents. I like the way you dream. Love this poem. Peace and love to you always.
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Date: 1/12/2017 10:28:00 AM
love this poem of emotions for night and day... nights are hard for me to sleep I seem to have energy I accomplish more..
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Date: 1/12/2017 7:12:00 AM
Don't let the morning sun, rise and ruin all your fun. :) Beautiful Demetrios
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Date: 1/12/2017 4:25:00 AM
Blessed are your Night and Day ... with you at wonderful play ... and you keep on writing lovely quatrain ... while the rose withers away
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Date: 1/12/2017 4:59:00 AM
A seven for you my friend, Probir! haha! Thank you!
Date: 1/12/2017 3:24:00 AM
- A warm and beautiful poem, dear Demetrios (7) - Best wishes for a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/12/2017 5:01:00 AM
I try to keep my friend warm at heart dearest, Anne-Lise! Thank you! Have a lovely day! Hugs!
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