Sleepy Me

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SLEEPY ME

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, NOON, TODAY, 12 JANUARY 2017, MY PHOTO,

Night kept me close to her heart

Refusing stubbornly to let me go

While day anxiously was awaiting

My self into her arms to throw!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
      12 January 2016

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/18/2017 2:21:00 PM

That's what daydreams are for, I suppose. Lovely poem, Demetrios. Such a romantic dilemma your poem presents. I like the way you dream. Love this poem. Peace and love to you always.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/12/2017 10:28:00 AM

love this poem of emotions for night and day... nights are hard for me to sleep I seem to have energy I accomplish more..

Chris Green

Date: 1/12/2017 7:12:00 AM

Don't let the morning sun, rise and ruin all your fun. :) Beautiful Demetrios

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/12/2017 4:25:00 AM

Blessed are your Night and Day ... with you at wonderful play ... and you keep on writing lovely quatrain ... while the rose withers away

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/12/2017 4:59:00 AM

A seven for you my friend, Probir! haha! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2017 3:24:00 AM

- A warm and beautiful poem, dear Demetrios (7) - Best wishes for a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/12/2017 5:01:00 AM

I try to keep my friend warm at heart dearest, Anne-Lise! Thank you! Have a lovely day! Hugs!