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Sleepy Lotus Eyes

sleepy lotus eyes gaze at singing frogs hop by… a pond dance invites © ........ .. ' by nette onclaud for PD's Haiku vs Senryu

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2014 10:15:00 PM

soupie for you.

Kash Poet

Date: 6/30/2012 6:43:00 AM

cHECK SOUP MAIL....

Ray Dillard

Date: 6/5/2012 4:50:00 PM

Way to go , Nette! Later, RAY

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/5/2012 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Nette. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/4/2012 9:14:00 AM

Congratulation on your win my friend. Loved always bl

David Williams

Date: 6/4/2012 2:43:00 AM

Nette congrats on your win..David

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/4/2012 12:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/4/2012 12:15:00 AM

Nice piece,Nette.Congratulations on your win.Thanks for my placing in your recent contest and for your wonderful comments on my works.have nice great week.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2012 6:44:00 PM

HI, Nette. Just looking thru the list of winners and remembering this one of yours with its light pond imagery. Thanks again for my win in your last contest. I hope you had a nice day. Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2012 6:20:00 PM

NETTE, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2012 3:37:00 PM

Wonderfully expressed work that reads like a winner to me..Enjoye reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/7/2012 2:26:00 AM

wow, you sure know how to wite wonderful Haiku's, good luck with this awesome entry. harry

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/6/2012 10:50:00 AM

Wonderful image bound with few sweet words. Wish you for the contest. Loved always, bl

Amy Green

Date: 5/6/2012 5:53:00 AM

Good one!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/6/2012 1:25:00 AM

Excellent imagery here Nette.Best wishes to you.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/5/2012 8:48:00 PM

What an incredible write my friend! I really do like the dance that is portrayed here! I'm fascinated by the, "peach lily pads rest, on cushions of water bed..." this is an awesome couple of lines! You've done a fantastic job with these couple of Haiku! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2012 8:30:00 PM

a cute dance ready to being here, dearie. I like the picture of the awakened lotus eyes!

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/5/2012 5:17:00 PM

Very Nice set of Haiku Nette! Lovely image... :) best wishes in the contest...big hugs, love ya , deb

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 5/5/2012 4:47:00 PM

Nice haikus about the pond dance, nette, like them, hugs, jag

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/5/2012 12:17:00 PM

Hi Nette - I`ve said it before. But they are so cute these "frog" poems ! - And so is yours to Nette, love it !!! Glad to see you, have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise

David Williams

Date: 5/5/2012 11:17:00 AM

Nette, good set of haiku's , good luck..David