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Sleepy Lotus Eyes

sleepy lotus eyes

          gaze at singing frogs hop by…

              a pond dance invites


  

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by nette onclaud for PD's Haiku vs Senryu

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/25/2014 10:15:00 PM soupie for you. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/30/2012 6:43:00 AM cHECK SOUP MAIL.... Login to Reply

Ray Dillard Date: 6/5/2012 4:50:00 PM Way to go , Nette! Later, RAY Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/5/2012 6:19:00 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Nette. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 6/4/2012 9:14:00 AM Congratulation on your win my friend. Loved always bl Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 6/4/2012 2:43:00 AM Nette congrats on your win..David Login to Reply

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet Date: 6/4/2012 12:23:00 AM Congratulations on your win...Great write!!! Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 6/4/2012 12:15:00 AM Nice piece,Nette.Congratulations on your win.Thanks for my placing in your recent contest and for your wonderful comments on my works.have nice great week. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/3/2012 6:44:00 PM HI, Nette. Just looking thru the list of winners and remembering this one of yours with its light pond imagery. Thanks again for my win in your last contest. I hope you had a nice day. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/3/2012 6:20:00 PM NETTE, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/7/2012 3:37:00 PM Wonderfully expressed work that reads like a winner to me..Enjoye reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 5/7/2012 2:26:00 AM wow, you sure know how to wite wonderful Haiku's, good luck with this awesome entry. harry Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 5/6/2012 10:50:00 AM Wonderful image bound with few sweet words. Wish you for the contest. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Amy Green Date: 5/6/2012 5:53:00 AM Good one! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/6/2012 1:25:00 AM Excellent imagery here Nette.Best wishes to you. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 5/5/2012 8:48:00 PM What an incredible write my friend! I really do like the dance that is portrayed here! I'm fascinated by the, "peach lily pads rest, on cushions of water bed..." this is an awesome couple of lines! You've done a fantastic job with these couple of Haiku! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! Great Work!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/5/2012 8:30:00 PM a cute dance ready to being here, dearie. I like the picture of the awakened lotus eyes! Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 5/5/2012 5:17:00 PM Very Nice set of Haiku Nette! Lovely image... :) best wishes in the contest...big hugs, love ya , deb Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 5/5/2012 4:47:00 PM Nice haikus about the pond dance, nette, like them, hugs, jag Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/5/2012 12:17:00 PM Hi Nette - I`ve said it before. But they are so cute these "frog" poems ! - And so is yours to Nette, love it !!! Glad to see you, have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 5/5/2012 11:17:00 AM Nette, good set of haiku's , good luck..David Login to Reply