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sleepy lotus eyes

sleepy lotus eyes gaze at singing frogs hop by… a pond dance invites © ........ .. ' by nette onclaud for PD's Haiku vs Senryu

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/25/2014 10:15:00 PM
soupie for you.
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Date: 6/30/2012 6:43:00 AM
cHECK SOUP MAIL....
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Date: 6/5/2012 4:50:00 PM
Way to go , Nette! Later, RAY
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Date: 6/5/2012 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 9:14:00 AM
Congratulation on your win my friend. Loved always bl
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Date: 6/4/2012 2:43:00 AM
Nette congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/4/2012 12:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!
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Date: 6/4/2012 12:15:00 AM
Nice piece,Nette.Congratulations on your win.Thanks for my placing in your recent contest and for your wonderful comments on my works.have nice great week.
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Date: 6/3/2012 6:44:00 PM
HI, Nette. Just looking thru the list of winners and remembering this one of yours with its light pond imagery. Thanks again for my win in your last contest. I hope you had a nice day. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/3/2012 6:20:00 PM
NETTE, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD
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Date: 5/7/2012 3:37:00 PM
Wonderfully expressed work that reads like a winner to me..Enjoye reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:26:00 AM
wow, you sure know how to wite wonderful Haiku's, good luck with this awesome entry. harry
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Date: 5/6/2012 10:50:00 AM
Wonderful image bound with few sweet words. Wish you for the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/6/2012 5:53:00 AM
Good one!
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Date: 5/6/2012 1:25:00 AM
Excellent imagery here Nette.Best wishes to you.
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Date: 5/5/2012 8:48:00 PM
What an incredible write my friend! I really do like the dance that is portrayed here! I'm fascinated by the, "peach lily pads rest, on cushions of water bed..." this is an awesome couple of lines! You've done a fantastic job with these couple of Haiku! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 5/5/2012 8:30:00 PM
a cute dance ready to being here, dearie. I like the picture of the awakened lotus eyes!
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Date: 5/5/2012 5:17:00 PM
Very Nice set of Haiku Nette! Lovely image... :) best wishes in the contest...big hugs, love ya , deb
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Date: 5/5/2012 4:47:00 PM
Nice haikus about the pond dance, nette, like them, hugs, jag
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Date: 5/5/2012 12:17:00 PM
Hi Nette - I`ve said it before. But they are so cute these "frog" poems ! - And so is yours to Nette, love it !!! Glad to see you, have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/5/2012 11:17:00 AM
Nette, good set of haiku's , good luck..David
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