Sleepy Delusion

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Written September 8, 2023
For The Premiere Contest, “A Hypnagogic Dream”
Sponsor, Suzette Richards

Not quite awake, I drifted back to dreaming
as sleep would not give up fulfilling magic;
soon lifting me into a sense of twirling-
among bright flowers dancing in a meadow.
I quickly woke to see small snowflakes falling.

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Suzette Richards

Date: 10/7/2023 4:31:00 AM

May I have your e-mail address. please as I will be sending the PDF and not a hardcopy (as explained in my soup mail to you). Have a nice weekend. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/6/2023 8:24:00 AM

I’d love to be in such a trance! Congratulations, Sandra!

Suzette Richards

Date: 10/6/2023 1:29:00 AM

Congratulations, Sandra. Thank you for supporting my Hypnagogic Dream contest. In order to claim your prize of the book, DOWNTOWN – Poetic Devices, please soup mail me your e-mail address. Regards, Suzette