Sleepwalking

She wanders through the empty house
wondering how these moments slipped away,
and when it was that she became
a woman past her prime.

He wanders through his empty life
wondering how these memories became
ash upon his tongue. The young
man he once was is gone.

Walking backward through their lives,
with eyes fixed steadily on salad days,
they missed the opportunities to grow
into the people they could have been.

Eventually they face the day
when they have fewer days ahead than
those they left behind.  

Soon, they will feel the cold hand of death nearing.
Soon, it will be morning.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Caliri Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 12:38 AM
This is chilling! And effective...nice job.
Wolff Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Thank you, Matt.
Winter Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 5:24 PM
The feeling is well expressed, the reality all too real for some. An excellent write capturing a depressing situation. Well done! Love, Shar
Wolff Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Thank you, Sharon.
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