Sleeplessness

I cannot sleep
I can't find dreams
Though tired as my body seems
My mind adrift
Thoughts everywhere
I wish I could fly away up there
Let go of the future
Forget the past
Because none of this is made to last
But my brain won't stop
It won't slow down
In pointless thoughts I continually drown
So here I am
Writing away
Trying to pass the time of day
Until into sleep
I finally fall
Hopefully dream of nothing at all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 10/15/2023 12:46:00 AM
I find this happens to me a lot to. - Phoenix :)
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Aly Bahr
Date: 2/25/2024 5:29:00 PM
Why am I not surprised Firebird, you are so like me!
Date: 9/28/2023 4:25:00 PM
A lovely poem again, but dreaming can sometimes bring us happiness, have hope! - Shared poems :)
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Date: 9/28/2023 10:24:00 AM
I can understand how some can find it challenging to get some sleep, sleeplessness is real. I see so many that go through that. “ but my brain wont stop it wont slow down” very well expressed. And brilliant rhymes too.Usually i read , when i need to fall asleep. Reading helps me. If it isnt an intriguing write. Sending you light today and always
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Aly Bahr
Date: 9/28/2023 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Ink Empress. Luckily sleeplessness for me is only occasional. And I've always been an avid reader, but a good book is impossible to put down! Must write a poem about that. ;]
Date: 9/28/2023 5:25:00 AM
Nice rhymes!
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Aly Bahr
Date: 9/28/2023 2:11:00 PM
Thanks Karen.
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