Sleeplessness

It’s an old trick in the book
To count sheep till you fall asleep
But Mr. Insomnia stays up late
It seems he wants to be my date!
He seems to have alternate plans
He makes me do things I cannot understand
Why the other day for crying out loud
He punished me and threw me out!
It was dark and O so cold, I begged him
Yes I implored, his good humour seemed restored
He took me on a merry go round
I started giggling but had promised 
not to make a single sound
Mr. Insomnia’s red eyes on my back
Making me go round on a circular track!
He is a monster that grows inside of me
And conspires with someone 
I don’t even want to know 
My movements are extremely slow
Why the other day my heart skipped 
I only knew it could beat!
Mr. Insomnia arose from his seat  
It early morning he is shuffling now
Moving quickly towards his den
If he turns around I’m ready to stab
Him with my only weapon the mighty pen
Instead of sheep, I now count to ten!

20.5.22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 12:29 PM
Good one. I can sure relate to this one.
Mitra Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 11:01 PM
Yes dear Andrea....a lot of us can...Take care :)
Mcconnell Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 9:04 AM
This is a brilliant piece penned on This subject Carol, such great rhyme and flow along with great insight and imagery. Thanks for sharing,regards from Scotland, Gordon
Mitra Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 10:51 PM
Thanks Gordon....I am glad you liked the poem....much love :)
Goff Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 5:41 PM
Fun, spirited poem Carol!
Mitra Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 1:36 AM
Thanks James .....Indeed it is ....but the people who suffer from Insomnia go through much turmoil .....put a light note on the spin :)
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