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Sleepless Night

sleepless night---
the moon becomes
more familiar




© kash poet 2012
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Placement: 1st;(Feb. 2012)

Contest: Any Verse Maxm. 12 lines

Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Terry L. Allen

May 12, 2012 at 6:08 AM

I've seen a few of these nights as I am sure many others have. Well said. Huggs TLee

Terry L. Allen

May 12, 2012 at 6:10 AM

oops it looks like I reviewed twice. Oh Well Huggs TLee

Terry L. Allen

April 26, 2012 at 3:06 AM

I understand what it says very well but I am not familiar with this style as of yet. Your way ahead of me my friend. Huggs TLee

Jslambert Mister Roboto

February 27, 2012 at 2:15 AM

Big Ups on the One Spot! BTW...Back to the last comment I left you...(yeah, the weird one:) The Weirdness of the Soup continues for me tonite. I went NEXT to read a poem by Chris A. called the "Lobotomizer" where one of the lines reads "in the fall of SIXTY-NINE"----U believe that? Check my comment to him. Alright, now u probably think I am a complete Idiot! It's all good.:)

Wilma Neels

February 26, 2012 at 7:37 AM

I hate those nights Kash, love your haiku though.. congratulations on your win :) nope I didn't get the error message again.. soupmail returned :)

Andrea Dietrich

February 25, 2012 at 5:07 PM

FIRST PLACE. Big congrats.

Bl Devnath

February 25, 2012 at 12:02 PM

Yes, my friend, wonderful poem of sleepless night. Congrats too. loved always, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 25, 2012 at 6:34 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Verse Of Yours" contest *Kash8. Love, Carol"

Poet Destroyer A

February 24, 2012 at 9:05 PM

KASH~CONGRATUALTIONS! With your wonderful win..in Brian's contest ;-)~ always*PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 24, 2012 at 8:04 PM

congrats Kash on a fine first place win luv..

Sara Kendrick

February 24, 2012 at 2:53 PM

Been there..Congrats on your win in Brian's contest..Sara

Nette Onclaud

February 23, 2012 at 6:06 AM

KASHI... SOUO MAIL.. quick! :)

Andrea Dietrich

February 22, 2012 at 10:45 PM

Big fave on this one, Kash. For me it's maybe your best haiku ever.

Nette Onclaud

February 22, 2012 at 10:06 PM

kringg, kring!... awestruck by the clear yet shining element of surprise in your 'ku, kashi bud!.. if for a contest, go and win!.. :) huggs! come visit!

Gwendolen Song

February 22, 2012 at 7:26 PM

So you had to sleep facing the window AGAIN? ha ha..wonderful haiku for Charles' contest, Kash. You know it's bad when the MAN in the Moon starts looking like a WOMAN!!! ha ha. Gwendolen