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Sleepless Night

sleepless night--- the moon becomes more familiar © kash poet 2012 ================ Placement: 1st;(Feb. 2012) Contest: Any Verse Maxm. 12 lines Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/12/2012 6:08:00 AM

I've seen a few of these nights as I am sure many others have. Well said. Huggs TLee

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/12/2012 6:10:00 AM

oops it looks like I reviewed twice. Oh Well Huggs TLee

Terry L. Allen

Date: 4/26/2012 3:06:00 AM

I understand what it says very well but I am not familiar with this style as of yet. Your way ahead of me my friend. Huggs TLee

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 2/27/2012 2:15:00 AM

Big Ups on the One Spot! BTW...Back to the last comment I left you...(yeah, the weird one:) The Weirdness of the Soup continues for me tonite. I went NEXT to read a poem by Chris A. called the "Lobotomizer" where one of the lines reads "in the fall of SIXTY-NINE"----U believe that? Check my comment to him. Alright, now u probably think I am a complete Idiot! It's all good.:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/26/2012 7:37:00 AM

I hate those nights Kash, love your haiku though.. congratulations on your win :) nope I didn't get the error message again.. soupmail returned :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2012 5:07:00 PM

FIRST PLACE. Big congrats.

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/25/2012 12:02:00 PM

Yes, my friend, wonderful poem of sleepless night. Congrats too. loved always, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2012 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Verse Of Yours" contest *Kash8. Love, Carol"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2012 9:05:00 PM

KASH~CONGRATUALTIONS! With your wonderful win..in Brian's contest ;-)~ always*PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2012 8:04:00 PM

congrats Kash on a fine first place win luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2012 2:53:00 PM

Been there..Congrats on your win in Brian's contest..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/23/2012 6:06:00 AM

KASHI... SOUO MAIL.. quick! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2012 10:45:00 PM

Big fave on this one, Kash. For me it's maybe your best haiku ever.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/22/2012 10:06:00 PM

kringg, kring!... awestruck by the clear yet shining element of surprise in your 'ku, kashi bud!.. if for a contest, go and win!.. :) huggs! come visit!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/22/2012 7:26:00 PM

So you had to sleep facing the window AGAIN? ha ha..wonderful haiku for Charles' contest, Kash. You know it's bad when the MAN in the Moon starts looking like a WOMAN!!! ha ha. Gwendolen

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/22/2012 5:12:00 PM

it is so true.....the moon and I have become very good friends, in fact! I love this one!

Shirley Long

Date: 2/22/2012 2:35:00 PM

Great haiku! I enjoyed reading it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2012 1:04:00 PM

Recognize myself in this poem kash,sleepless night - talks with moon. - oxox love Anne-Lise