Michael J. Falotico Poet Kimo

Sleepless Dreams

Tossing through the night in a sleepless dream...
                                                        Eyes wide open, I can't see...
                                                          Reaching for you to hold...

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Laura Breidenthal March 9, 2012 at 7:04 PM This is awesome and a very interesting way to go about the subject. I really enjoyed reading; keep up the excellent work! Always, Laura

Kevin Clark March 5, 2012 at 6:01 PM Without love there is no rest. Ive been there.

Dinda Minardi March 5, 2012 at 9:07 AM Very very romantic. I used to do this when I was younger, but I reached to my mom of course. You write more often now, dear. Good thing!

Cindy Lu March 5, 2012 at 9:00 AM simple use of the English language, with reflections I know so well... :) take good care and God Bless you, Cindy

Dawn Mclaughlin March 5, 2012 at 8:58 AM Lovely Michael...thank you for the lovely comment..Dawn

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 4, 2012 at 11:05 PM A lovely kimo, Michael. I hope you are sleeping well tonight. Thanks for your kind comments this weekend. Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 4, 2012 at 3:49 PM sweetly sultry Michael luv.. romance rules.. visual impact.. oh.. JG getting ready for biddie bye...xoxo

Wilma Neels March 4, 2012 at 8:32 AM Your last line is just perfect for this one Michael, a gem for sure :) it's about time you try them I say lol just kidding :) *hugs* Wilma

Tracy Edwards March 4, 2012 at 8:21 AM Isn't it nice to have someone to turn to in the wee hours of the night..lovely write Michael xxx Hugs

Tracy Edwards March 4, 2012 at 8:02 AM Aww I cant see your poem :( ill sign out and come back lol xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2012 at 7:11 AM You have to sleep in night ....and have lovely dreams Michael.Happy Sunday to you to. - oxox Anne-Lise

Michael J. Falotico March 4, 2012 at 7:08 AM I'm trying some other forms, bare with me..lol.....Happy Sunday Soupers....