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Sleeping Thought

one
thought waits
in slumber
floating fully
inside waked eyes; closed
hoping to be visioned
made with vibrant and color
instead of staying spoken in
known, but not knowing of the outside
for dreams for it, is its only full life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/22/2010 1:05:00 PM
I like it. This is not like counting sheep to go to sleep. I like the floating imagery and the vibrant colors. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/21/2010 6:28:00 PM
A nice thought expressed in Etheree
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