Michael J. Falotico Poet Light Verse

"sleeping Rose"

We stand like a Rose...
Our head straight to our toes..
Pedals fall from our head..
Still looking strong and not dead..
Our stems with thorns..
A fragrant that allures...
Side by side we grow..
Paraded in a garden we show...
Till the cold wilts us away...
Our beauty will rule the day...
Spring returns with life...
I hope we slept well tonight..

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Wilma Neels June 11, 2010 at 10:18 PM Beautiful analogy, and i did sleep well Michael -rgds WN Ps : thanks for your kind comment :)

John Freeman June 11, 2010 at 9:16 PM Some nice rhyming in your Light Poetry, Michael. Thanks for your gracious comments today. Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2010 at 7:11 PM love this write, enjoyed..P.D.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 11, 2010 at 6:10 PM Spring always returns with life full of love, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 11, 2010 at 4:10 PM Wonderful analogy of us as roses..Michael this one is a sleeping beauty romance rose... SOUP MAIL.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire June 11, 2010 at 3:28 PM We all have our moments of beauty in the sun "until the cold wilts us away," Michael. These are moments to be treasured always. Enjoyed your poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn