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"sleeping Rose"

We stand like a Rose... Our head straight to our toes.. Pedals fall from our head.. Still looking strong and not dead.. Our stems with thorns.. A fragrant that allures... Side by side we grow.. Paraded in a garden we show... Till the cold wilts us away... Our beauty will rule the day... Spring returns with life... I hope we slept well tonight..

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Wilma Neels

Date: 6/11/2010 10:18:00 PM

Beautiful analogy, and i did sleep well Michael -rgds WN Ps : thanks for your kind comment :)

John Freeman

Date: 6/11/2010 9:16:00 PM

Some nice rhyming in your Light Poetry, Michael. Thanks for your gracious comments today. Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2010 7:11:00 PM

love this write, enjoyed..P.D.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/11/2010 6:10:00 PM

Spring always returns with life full of love, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/11/2010 4:10:00 PM

Wonderful analogy of us as roses..Michael this one is a sleeping beauty romance rose... SOUP MAIL.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/11/2010 3:28:00 PM

We all have our moments of beauty in the sun "until the cold wilts us away," Michael. These are moments to be treasured always. Enjoyed your poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn