Sleeping Man

I watch you as you sleep mysterious man.
Lost in a land of dreams - inhabiting a 
different world  to me - temporarily.

Or maybe you always do?
Do you really know me or I you?
Married, yet separated somehow by

our differences - missing the point.
Sometimes dwelling in disunited silence.
Lost in languid ignorance of one another's musing.

I long for you to touch me tenderly;
to see transparently the love that used to be.
Or maybe still is, but different now somehow.

I long for you to listen; to notice me.
A mutuality of conversation; a shared 
interest in humanity, but you dismiss me.

A rushed kiss and you are gone again.
Talking on the ever ringing phone as you 
gesture a half hearted goodbye.

Goodbye then.  Will you even notice?
When you come home and I'm not here -
how long for you to realise that I have gone?

I watch you as you sleep mysterious man.
Lost in a different reality - inhabiting a
different world to me - permanently.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 3, 2009 at 9:32 PM
Helen, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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April 28, 2009 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Helen. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 19, 2008 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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November 19, 2008 at 4:37 AM
IT'S ACTUALLY LIKE HE'S DREAMING, BUT MORE LIKE HE'S IN A TRANCE...HE SEES BUT DOESN'T SEE.YOUR POEM IS HEAVY WITH EMOTIONS!I CAN HEAR THE SIGHS AND SEE THE TEARS UNTIL YOU DECIDED TO PUT A PERMANENT END TO THE COMATOSE RELATIONSHIP.GOOD POEM.JIDE BADMUS
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November 18, 2008 at 4:59 AM
Great write... Congrats, D.
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November 17, 2008 at 12:38 PM
Well done, Helen. Congratulations this week's featured poem!! ~ Carrie
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November 17, 2008 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations Helen on "Sleeping Man" being featured. Vince
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November 2, 2008 at 4:36 AM
AS long as there is NO snoring !!! ZZZZZZZ ...
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