Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

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Sleeping Beauty Awakens To Fate

SLEEPING BEAUTY AWAKENS TO FATE

Beauty shrouds its sovereign brilliance under extremes
The oppressive Black Forest of fairy tale dreams

Buried far below the palatial sunrise
Dressed in farmer’s jeans, burrs in golden nest
An orphaned princess plays, regality suppressed
Godmothers ensure her fingers bleed no spindle cries
Rose, cosseted from laughter -  the lust, that hopes she dies
Malificent doth yearn to steal her enemy's royal crest

Mine ears hear music
A sultry song of beauty
O steed so strong ~ ride yonder

Magnificent prince!
My heart shudders ~ I’m frightened
Sifting winds doth change my fate

4/20/2017
Laura Loo’s Three Style III Contest
One couplet, One stanza, One sedoka
A-A; A-B-B-A-A-B; 5-7-7-5-7-7

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Lin Lane April 20, 2017 at 2:07 PM You protected the princess with clever lines. My favorite lines were, Mine ears hear music.....O steed so strong ~ ride yonder." And they lived happily ever after ;-) Kim Rodrigues April 20, 2017 at 2:08 PM Thank you, Lin! :)

Chris Green April 20, 2017 at 1:21 PM So creative, am artistic delight my friend. Your writing always takes me places I have not been before. Kim Rodrigues April 20, 2017 at 1:24 PM Thank you, Chris! I am always so happy when you tell me so! I try to put myself in the place of the characters.