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Sleeping Beauty

june sweet
rose scent drifts
over the wall -
beyond, the unpicked dreams
slumber

4/3/2017
For contest April 2017 any form any theme
Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Line Gauthier

July 24, 2018 at 10:56 PM

Lovely, Agnes.

Paul Callus

April 7, 2017 at 3:19 PM

A beautiful Cinqku, Agnes! Very poetical. This could easily have been a modern Tanka, too. #7 Regards // paul

Eve Roper

April 4, 2017 at 6:02 PM

wonderfully written ~*

Pashang Salehi

April 4, 2017 at 3:45 PM

I wish I can offer you a rose... Cute, very cute....

Pashang Salehi

April 5, 2017 at 2:47 AM

You bet.....

Agnes Krampe

April 4, 2017 at 5:00 PM

Thanks, Pashang

Phillip Garcia

April 3, 2017 at 11:27 PM

This too, is flawless. I'm not all that familiar with the form but you've inspired me to learn about it. Such softness in your lyrical touch. Well done

Agnes Krampe

April 4, 2017 at 5:00 PM

Thank you, Phillip. It's my first cinqku; I'd never done one, but Brian wants a five line form for his contest.

Andrea Dietrich

April 3, 2017 at 8:45 PM

wow, this is an excellent show of this poetry form. I hope I have faved you as a poet, Agnes. I am so behind on updating my followed poet list. Let me check it!

Agnes Krampe

April 3, 2017 at 9:28 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I feel honored that you are following my poetry (I checked my followers list).