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Sleeping Beauty

june sweet rose scent drifts over the wall - beyond, the unpicked dreams slumber 4/3/2017 For contest April 2017 any form any theme Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/24/2018 10:56:00 PM

Lovely, Agnes.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2017 3:19:00 PM

A beautiful Cinqku, Agnes! Very poetical. This could easily have been a modern Tanka, too. #7 Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2017 6:02:00 PM

wonderfully written ~*

Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/4/2017 3:45:00 PM

I wish I can offer you a rose... Cute, very cute....

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/5/2017 2:47:00 AM

You bet.....

Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/4/2017 5:00:00 PM

Thanks, Pashang

Phillip Garcia

Date: 4/3/2017 11:27:00 PM

This too, is flawless. I'm not all that familiar with the form but you've inspired me to learn about it. Such softness in your lyrical touch. Well done

Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/4/2017 5:00:00 PM

Thank you, Phillip. It's my first cinqku; I'd never done one, but Brian wants a five line form for his contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2017 8:45:00 PM

wow, this is an excellent show of this poetry form. I hope I have faved you as a poet, Agnes. I am so behind on updating my followed poet list. Let me check it!

Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/3/2017 9:28:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I feel honored that you are following my poetry (I checked my followers list).

Chris Green

Date: 4/3/2017 5:36:00 PM

This is beautiful Agnes. It reads in a so soft and flowing manner. Good luck in the contest

Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/3/2017 9:27:00 PM

Thank you, Chris.