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sleeping beauty

june sweet
rose scent drifts
over the wall -
beyond, the unpicked dreams
slumber

4/3/2017
For contest April 2017 any form any theme
Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 7/24/2018 10:56:00 PM
Lovely, Agnes.
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Date: 4/7/2017 3:19:00 PM
A beautiful Cinqku, Agnes! Very poetical. This could easily have been a modern Tanka, too. #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 4/4/2017 6:02:00 PM
wonderfully written ~*
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Date: 4/4/2017 3:45:00 PM
I wish I can offer you a rose... Cute, very cute....
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/5/2017 2:47:00 AM
You bet.....
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/4/2017 5:00:00 PM
Thanks, Pashang
Date: 4/3/2017 11:27:00 PM
This too, is flawless. I'm not all that familiar with the form but you've inspired me to learn about it. Such softness in your lyrical touch. Well done
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/4/2017 5:00:00 PM
Thank you, Phillip. It's my first cinqku; I'd never done one, but Brian wants a five line form for his contest.
Date: 4/3/2017 8:45:00 PM
wow, this is an excellent show of this poetry form. I hope I have faved you as a poet, Agnes. I am so behind on updating my followed poet list. Let me check it!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/3/2017 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I feel honored that you are following my poetry (I checked my followers list).
Date: 4/3/2017 5:36:00 PM
This is beautiful Agnes. It reads in a so soft and flowing manner. Good luck in the contest
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/3/2017 9:27:00 PM
Thank you, Chris.