Sleeping Beauty

Locked in her tower our heroine sleeps alone
This beautiful flower has been kidnapped from her throne
She stares at the moonlight then drifts off to sleep 
To dream of a brave knight scaling the castles keep.
Her flaxen hair frames her delicate ivory skin
Vivid dreams of her hero reveal her beauty within
Steadfast and strong and ready to fight to the death
To rescue this beauty he will forgo his last breath.
Her chivalrous knight enters the abductors domain
Soon she'll taste the sweetness of freedom again.
His shield raised high and broadsword drawn
With every step he takes, for her hope is reborn
Caught off guard with a blow he is swept of his feet
He fights blindly on until his quest is complete
To vanquish the captors is his goal and last wish
Sweep the princess off her feet with a tender kiss
He slashes the ropes that bind her to the bed 
Making passionate love for hours now they are happily wed

19th May 2014
Written By Jan Allison & Darren Watson
~submitted to Dave Wood's Imagination Contest~
Awarded 1st place - am so delighted to have won this with Darren he 
is my inspiration
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May 31, 2014 at 8:06 AM
I am glad you and Darren R working awesomely together... XOX..Linda
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May 31, 2014 at 8:36 AM
He's simply the best! He can be a bit naughty but he blames me for this! Now we are 'married' I'm getting used to him and his little ways - he is a very special guy and I'm so lucky to have him in my life. Hugs Jan xxxx
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May 29, 2014 at 6:28 PM
Jadazzle, love this... PD
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May 30, 2014 at 1:17 AM
Thanks Linda I was so made up to get number one spot with Darren it made the win even more special. Hugs Jan xxx
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May 28, 2014 at 3:52 PM
Wonderful imigination you have, Jan. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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May 28, 2014 at 4:46 PM
Yes, I will congratulate his him also. laianie
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May 28, 2014 at 4:02 PM
Its a collaboration poem Elaine. Darren and I work together so well and have so much fun. I hope this comes out in our poems together. Hugs Jan xxx
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May 28, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Hahahha I love the action as well as the descriptive images in it..:) loools noted: for hours that makes me smile..:) CONGRATULATIONS!!!! GBU both
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May 28, 2014 at 11:18 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Olive. Hugs Jan xxx
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May 28, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Beautiful story ...congrats on your win
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May 28, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Joseph. Hugs Jan xxx
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May 28, 2014 at 12:15 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, Jadazzle
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May 28, 2014 at 1:51 AM
Thank you for those kind words Dr Mehta. Hugs Jan xx
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May 27, 2014 at 10:52 PM
Amazing Jadazzle ! superb imaginative ,, congrats on top win !
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May 28, 2014 at 1:50 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment Dr Sharma i am so delighted for us both. Hugs Jan xx
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May 20, 2014 at 10:19 AM
Dear Jan and Darren, You two certainly have imagination! I have always enjoyed reading about chivalrous knights rescuing damsels in distress. The is so creative and I'm sure it will win. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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May 20, 2014 at 10:40 AM
We write and have enormous fun Carolyn. Darren is a dream to write with our verses simply flow with little or no alteration. I count myself as the luckiest lady in the world! Hugs Jan xxx
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May 19, 2014 at 5:25 PM
Woohoo Awesome :) Love it!
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May 20, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Thanks Casarah for your lovely comment as ever. Hugs Jan xxx
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