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Sleeping beauty

Locked in her tower our heroine sleeps alone
This beautiful flower has been kidnapped from her throne
She stares at the moonlight then drifts off to sleep 
To dream of a brave knight scaling the castles keep.
Her flaxen hair frames her delicate ivory skin
Vivid dreams of her hero reveal her beauty within
Steadfast and strong and ready to fight to the death
To rescue this beauty he will forgo his last breath.
Her chivalrous knight enters the abductors domain
Soon she'll taste the sweetness of freedom again.
His shield raised high and broadsword drawn
With every step he takes, for her hope is reborn
Caught off guard with a blow he is swept of his feet
He fights blindly on until his quest is complete
To vanquish the captors is his goal and last wish
Sweep the princess off her feet with a tender kiss
He slashes the ropes that bind her to the bed 
Making passionate love for hours now they are happily wed

19th May 2014
Written By Jan Allison & Darren Watson
~submitted to Dave Wood's Imagination Contest~
Awarded 1st place - am so delighted to have won this with Darren he 
is my inspiration 

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Date: 5/31/2014 8:06:00 AM
I am glad you and Darren R working awesomely together... XOX..Linda
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Date: 5/31/2014 8:36:00 AM
He's simply the best! He can be a bit naughty but he blames me for this! Now we are 'married' I'm getting used to him and his little ways - he is a very special guy and I'm so lucky to have him in my life. Hugs Jan xxxx
Date: 5/29/2014 6:28:00 PM
Jadazzle, love this... PD
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Date: 5/30/2014 1:17:00 AM
Thanks Linda I was so made up to get number one spot with Darren it made the win even more special. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 5/28/2014 3:52:00 PM
Wonderful imigination you have, Jan. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 5/28/2014 4:46:00 PM
Yes, I will congratulate his him also. laianie
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Date: 5/28/2014 4:02:00 PM
Its a collaboration poem Elaine. Darren and I work together so well and have so much fun. I hope this comes out in our poems together. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 5/28/2014 10:49:00 AM
Hahahha I love the action as well as the descriptive images in it..:) loools noted: for hours that makes me smile..:) CONGRATULATIONS!!!! GBU both
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Date: 5/28/2014 11:18:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Olive. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 5/28/2014 10:34:00 AM
Beautiful story ...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/28/2014 11:17:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Joseph. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 5/28/2014 12:15:00 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, Jadazzle
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Date: 5/28/2014 1:51:00 AM
Thank you for those kind words Dr Mehta. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/27/2014 10:52:00 PM
Amazing Jadazzle ! superb imaginative ,, congrats on top win !
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Date: 5/28/2014 1:50:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment Dr Sharma i am so delighted for us both. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/27/2014 8:40:00 PM
You two have rocking imaginations.. What a fun write and read. An absolute delight. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/28/2014 1:50:00 AM
Stunned Stunned Stunned Stunned and so proud to get a first place with this poem. Darren and I have such fun when we write and to have the honour of a first place in your contest makes it all worth while. Hugs as ever Dave. Jan xxxx
Date: 5/20/2014 10:19:00 AM
Dear Jan and Darren, You two certainly have imagination! I have always enjoyed reading about chivalrous knights rescuing damsels in distress. The is so creative and I'm sure it will win. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2014 10:40:00 AM
We write and have enormous fun Carolyn. Darren is a dream to write with our verses simply flow with little or no alteration. I count myself as the luckiest lady in the world! Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 5/19/2014 5:25:00 PM
Woohoo Awesome :) Love it!
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Date: 5/20/2014 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Casarah for your lovely comment as ever. Hugs Jan xxx