Sleeping Beauty

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Dedicated to friend and singer!

Sleeping Beauty to fatigue a woman via satiny sleep is my forte any lady I can send into repose my formula seems a grand success I recite my long winded poetry sleeping beauty falls endlessly into coma as I weep she sleeps

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/14/2019 1:19:00 PM

Despite your weeping, sleeping beauty is sleeping , but maybe probably or hopefully not for ever - in her endless sleep might be aware of your presence! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/2/2019 5:58:00 AM

How sad, my friend! But, on second thoughts, in her sleeps she could be happily dreaming of the poet who she secretly admires but is shy to let on:)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/24/2019 3:54:00 PM

lol Art the art of seduction seems to have gone awry lol:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/24/2019 11:21:00 AM

ohh, like a child who simply dozes off even before the plot unravels... love the last lines, arthur.. try reading 50 shades of gray,lol... huggs

Bobby May

Date: 1/24/2019 7:33:00 AM

Girls they never listen, a wonderful poem my friend!