Sleep Walking

I got out of bed
I wore my fuzzy gown
Because I sleep naked
Walked to the door
Opened the door for them
Groaned at them
I shuffled back to my room
Closed my bedroom door
Removed my gown
Got back in bed
And continued...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mumo Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 12:30 AM
Somnambulism - or sleep walking for everyone's understanding, is what your poem is about. I like the way you paint a scenario and then leave the reader to complete the image and intentions of the persona...a 7!
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March 18, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Wow thank you Hannington for your words and a 7! Be blessed.
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