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Sleep Now With My Indomitable Fire

With all my frosty fires I rise up-- To the risen rage that fills the skies within my eyes Where is the cage that looks to lock me up-- Its bars no match for the laughter of my boot Show me your wretched chains, like rusted amulets-- I plan to use them as filament, only to clean my smoking pipe Unload your wishful trove of tactics on me-- For I promise the soil that my heels will never turn And when you fail amongst the body I expect you'll turn to your words-- Like hooks in the slaughter, you'll try and flip me up with your venomous tongues Preposterous protection I say-- I drink the blood of cowards, your spoken hate tastes of mercy! Take your razor words and swallow them whole-- Along with the spoon and the bowl Conceal my fruits and I shall rage against your secrets-- For there is nothing within me that was born asleep Do not tempt those willing to set fire to the mountain tops-- For they climb holding tight destiny's fortitude, ready to burn with the spear; March 21, 2016

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Date: 4/7/2016 8:14:00 PM
Edgy Sam. A colossal sized "Don't Mess With Me" written with poetic flair, "Take your razors words and swallow them whole--- Along with the spoon and the bowl" ... yikes! Makes me cringe just thinking about it. Freedom can really burn with brazen fury if you're not careful! Lot of poets here sure have written some passionate pieces on this theme, and this was no exception ... I was quite fond of the "laughter of your boot" ... killer phrase.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/8/2016 5:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Tim, for the feedback-- glad to hear some elements were able to stand out. The prompt def brought out a lot of different angles-- some ferocious, some philosophical, and some poetic...I'm glad I was able to create and compete though. Thanks for the read, have a great weekend my friend :)
Date: 4/6/2016 10:57:00 PM
Sam, Nice to see your poem showcased in Justin's "Where Freedom Finds The Fire Contest List." Love LINDA
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/8/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Linda-- I appreciate the kind support :) Have a great weekend!
Date: 4/6/2016 2:29:00 AM
Congrats on a worthy win Sam..
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/6/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma-- I appreciate your kind comment my friend :)

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