Sleep Now With My Indomitable Fire

With all my frosty fires I rise up--
To the risen rage that fills the skies within my eyes

Where is the cage that looks to lock me up--
Its bars no match for the laughter of my boot

Show me your wretched chains, like rusted amulets--
I plan to use them as filament, only to clean my smoking pipe

Unload your wishful trove of tactics on me--
For I promise the soil that my heels will never turn

And when you fail amongst the body I expect you'll turn to your words--
Like hooks in the slaughter, you'll try and flip me up with your venomous tongues

Preposterous protection I say--
I drink the blood of cowards, your spoken hate tastes of mercy!

Take your razor words and swallow them whole--
Along with the spoon and the bowl

Conceal my fruits and I shall rage against your secrets--
For there is nothing within me that was born asleep

Do not tempt those willing to set fire to the mountain tops--
For they climb holding tight destiny's fortitude, ready to burn with the spear;


March 21, 2016
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Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:14 PM
Edgy Sam. A colossal sized "Don't Mess With Me" written with poetic flair, "Take your razors words and swallow them whole--- Along with the spoon and the bowl" ... yikes! Makes me cringe just thinking about it. Freedom can really burn with brazen fury if you're not careful! Lot of poets here sure have written some passionate pieces on this theme, and this was no exception ... I was quite fond of the "laughter of your boot" ... killer phrase.
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April 8, 2016 at 5:38 PM
Thank you very much, Tim, for the feedback-- glad to hear some elements were able to stand out. The prompt def brought out a lot of different angles-- some ferocious, some philosophical, and some poetic...I'm glad I was able to create and compete though. Thanks for the read, have a great weekend my friend :)
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April 6, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Sam, Nice to see your poem showcased in Justin's "Where Freedom Finds The Fire Contest List." Love LINDA
Jameson Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 5:36 PM
Thank you, Linda-- I appreciate the kind support :) Have a great weekend!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:29 AM
Congrats on a worthy win Sam..
Jameson Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma-- I appreciate your kind comment my friend :)
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