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Sleep and Dream

When I fall asleep
I’ll chant your name to the dark
And dream of your breath

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Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2013 at 8:39 AM

well, I am back to where I had left off. I had said this one was enchanting and I will add, beautiful now.

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2013 at 7:32 PM

Enchanting!!

Rollo West

January 8, 2013 at 10:32 PM

Hello dear friend, thank you for your comments. Rollo

Sukmawati Komala

January 8, 2013 at 5:39 PM

dear poet Rollo,, very deep hearfelt...so sweet...enjoyed so very much :) thank you for sharing <3 SK

Rollo West

January 8, 2013 at 10:33 PM

Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Harry Horsman

January 8, 2013 at 2:58 PM

this is enchanting Rollo, an excellent Senryu

Rollo West

January 8, 2013 at 10:34 PM

Hey Harry, thank you so much for commenting. Rollo

Seren Roberts

January 8, 2013 at 6:33 AM

If only........Seren. Great write Rollo

Rollo West

January 8, 2013 at 10:34 PM

Hello Seren, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Russell Sivey

January 8, 2013 at 12:35 AM

And the beauty that her breath entertains within the darkness! I really loved reading this delightful and harmonious poem this evening! What a powerful image you paint within this masterful piece here Rollo! Awesome Work!!

Rollo West

January 8, 2013 at 10:35 PM

Hello my dear friend, thank you so much for stopping by and your great comment. Rollo