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Sleep and Dream

When I fall asleep I’ll chant your name to the dark And dream of your breath

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2013 8:39:00 AM

well, I am back to where I had left off. I had said this one was enchanting and I will add, beautiful now.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2013 7:32:00 PM

Enchanting!!

Rollo West
Date: 1/8/2013 10:32:00 PM

Hello dear friend, thank you for your comments. Rollo

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 1/8/2013 5:39:00 PM

dear poet Rollo,, very deep hearfelt...so sweet...enjoyed so very much :) thank you for sharing <3 SK

Rollo West
Date: 1/8/2013 10:33:00 PM

Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/8/2013 2:58:00 PM

this is enchanting Rollo, an excellent Senryu

Rollo West
Date: 1/8/2013 10:34:00 PM

Hey Harry, thank you so much for commenting. Rollo

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/8/2013 6:33:00 AM

If only........Seren. Great write Rollo

Rollo West
Date: 1/8/2013 10:34:00 PM

Hello Seren, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/8/2013 12:35:00 AM

And the beauty that her breath entertains within the darkness! I really loved reading this delightful and harmonious poem this evening! What a powerful image you paint within this masterful piece here Rollo! Awesome Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 1/8/2013 10:35:00 PM

Hello my dear friend, thank you so much for stopping by and your great comment. Rollo

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/7/2013 11:25:00 PM

Oh, I wish someone I know would do that, lol. Love it, Rollo :)

Rollo West
Date: 1/7/2013 11:26:00 PM

Ho oquyen, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo