L Milton Hankins Poet Tanka

Sledding

bright azure blue sky
cold, crisp air circulating
snow lies crustily
winter resists death struggle
no stopping boys sleigh riding

written January 23, 2022
entered "Bite Size No. 33" Poetry Contest
sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Caren Krutsinger January 25, 2022 at 1:35 AM lovely tanka which took me rapidly into winter's fun! L Milton Hankins January 25, 2022 at 9:06 AM There can be wonderful, fun times in winter. I guess I've just grown too old and infirmed to enjoy them. Sorry I never learned to snow ski!