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Sledding

bright azure blue sky cold, crisp air circulating snow lies crustily winter resists death struggle no stopping boys sleigh riding
written January 23, 2022 entered "Bite Size No. 33" Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 1/25/2022 1:35:00 AM
lovely tanka which took me rapidly into winter's fun!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/25/2022 9:06:00 AM
There can be wonderful, fun times in winter. I guess I've just grown too old and infirmed to enjoy them. Sorry I never learned to snow ski!

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