Slaves of Technology

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" TEMPTATION " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of rose and outdoors

Oh, technology,

You, robber of:

Our hearts

Our minds

Our very souls


Slaves have we become

To you

Having given up our dreams

Our ambitions

Our feelings


So


Here and there, aimlessly,

Ar
We are driven,
 
Sightless

Heartless

Mindless

Soulless

Against our will

Against our beliefs

Against our humanity,


Consequently,


Instead, of you, oh technology,
 
A servant of ours to be,

Subservient, to you, oh technology, we have

Become!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
    08 December 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 12/8/2022 1:52:00 PM
Dear friend and poet, Demetrios, this is a well-crafted poem. So accurate! Every day, I am concerned about the temptation.
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Date: 12/8/2022 8:14:00 AM
- A well written poem ... a little is good ... but too much is not good ... simple as that, my friend :) - hugs
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/8/2022 11:16:00 AM
True, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. " Nothing in Excess. " Thank you for visiting! Blessings and hugs xxx
Date: 12/8/2022 5:57:00 AM
So true! I feel the pull every day. Awesome rose!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/8/2022 6:39:00 AM
I took the photo of the rose at 11:00 this morning. I am glad you liked it, my friend, Vijay. Blessings!
Date: 12/8/2022 5:06:00 AM
Your words ring so true Demetrios. We see it all the time, I've heard of many ditching their technology like phones etc and they've all said how better they feel for doing it. You see it in restaurants everyone staring at their phones, no one talking. Technology may have its positive uses but moderation is the key. Tom .
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/8/2022 6:41:00 AM
Yes, I have noticed this movement, my friend, Tom, even in commercials here in Greece. Thank you for your analytic comment. Be blessed!
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