Slaves of Machines

lives run by machines.
from morning, till evening, how many machines run us.
iphone, apps, twitter, email.
facebook, music, tv, movies.
from morning till night,
machines are awaiting our commands
to please us in every possible way.
question is,
are we using machines?
or the machines are ruling us?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 30, 2011 at 9:49 PM
haha i like the topic of your poem and i totally agree. i think that they are running our lives and taking over every sense of humanity we have left in us. i look forward to reading more of your work.
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April 27, 2011 at 4:23 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amal. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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