Slate Sea Swirls

Slate sea swirls
a breath of air.
Quiet illusion
not so rare.

Electric charge
hair stands straight.
My heart and pulse
palpitate.

Kayak rocks
though not a storm.
A silent ship
elliptic form.

Hovers right above
my scalp.
Terror froze
my call for help.

Paddle slips
beneath the boat.
Nothing left
to help me float.

Horror now
my only friend.
How can this fate
be my end?

Shoreline seems
a million miles.
Solitude and peace
just smile.

Entity
envelopes me.
Light departs
dank darkness breathes...

Piercing screel 
hurts my brain.
Shuddering
fowl vomit rains.

Heat tears through
my lower limbs.
Blood pools 'round
fills to the rim.

Consciousness
falls through my knees.
Wracked with pain
I cannot breathe.

Snare begins 
to tighten round
both my wrists
without a sound.

Now is gone
the fight for life.
Only love
keeps shining bright.

Body broken
heart has stopped.
Mother's voice
A lollipop.

Sweet bird song
now fills the air.
Smell of roses
everywhere.

Friends surround
my smiling face.
Be on guard,
oh human race !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 14, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Kimberly :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Shaw Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Thank you SKAT!! You are so sweet xo
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March 3, 2015 at 11:03 AM
Expressive and creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Welcome to soup..Sara
Shaw Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 11:19 AM
Hi Sara, so nice to meet you. Thank you for the kind encouragement! Hugs, Kim
Leiser Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 4:55 PM
My goodness, so powerful! I was caught up in it! Very well written, a 7!
Shaw Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 5:09 PM
Hi Laura! So great to meet you! I truly appreciate your kind remarks, as I am new here and welcome all reviews. Thanks again for reading my work! Love & hugs, Kim
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