Slap stick comedy Laurel and Hardy-dodo

whimpering sniveling pout
mopey face bo ohwe-ohwe whine
scratching his head mopey face
I was here with me
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Kauffman Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 9:07 AM
So fun, Eve! Laurel and Hardy - what great subject matter for the contest! Love the last line, dear friend. Hope all is well. May your Lent be a season of blessings!
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 6:21 AM
Good one. There must be a contest because I have seen several poems similar to this in the last few days. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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