Ronny Madonsela Poet Free verse

Slamming Doors

The sound of anger is a silent one,
Don’t you know?
A deaf tone ringing, Vibrating then nothing 
An alliteration of explosive hollow emotions
 Replete with intoxicating truths

Words exchanged broke these smiles 
But are meaningless before doors slam 
Slamee or slammer does it matter?
For after these doors slam
We say what we mean


Ronny Madonsela 22/09/2012

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Nette Onclaud November 5, 2012 at 5:40 PM provoactive and blasting work, ronny.. silent waters run deep!.. wowie! :) huggs

Harry Horsman November 1, 2012 at 4:20 PM deep with emotion Ronny, a well written poem,, really holds the reader...

Kash Poet October 30, 2012 at 8:38 PM An insightful write here Ronny.Enjoyed the read.

Holly Moore October 30, 2012 at 4:49 PM How true..I think you say what you mean when you are angry, unfortunately..great imagery..Thanks for commenting on my poems....Holly Moore

Nette Onclaud October 30, 2012 at 1:44 PM power-pack verse, pace... i was there from dtart to finish; wow!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2012 at 8:12 AM very interesting the way you portrayed human emotion and fighting in this poem, Ronny. I liked this one.

Joy Wellington October 20, 2012 at 5:10 PM Yep! Anger can be soooo silent, at which point it may be worse that the noise. Great write Ron. Thanks for visiting and love your hearty comment. One love. Joy Wells

Sandra Adams October 17, 2012 at 7:14 PM oh this is so true...made me think of times i heard doors slamming, and no words were needed....great write!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 17, 2012 at 8:52 AM Ah, how painful silence can be and yes, anger can be so silent and say so much, it can tear the soul--- I really like this, Ronny...I have been trying to write a poem on silence as well, hopefully I can finish it soon-- you have managed to wrap up silence with a few lines...thank you btw for passing by my poem, glad you like it...

Elizabeth Wesley October 14, 2012 at 7:18 PM Thisshows that we don't handle ange it handles us. A lot of emotion in this one Ronny; can't wait to make up! :)

Chidozie Uche O. October 10, 2012 at 1:33 AM Slamming doors is symbolical, I know of muggers slamming doors, police too does that, angry husband or wife, young people also, representing vexed spirit of different kind of people....... Doors are being slammed when those wonderful smiles go away. Nice poem.....

Jack Ellison October 6, 2012 at 3:07 PM Well written Ronny... very intense! Hugs, Jack XOX

Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2012 at 2:13 PM Powerful poem Ronny - Have a lovely weekend. - xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud October 3, 2012 at 9:26 AM ronny, been a while.. so glad i clicked on this page... that ending is great, with the honest portrayal of a tiff blocking love's view... really great stuff...:) huggs!

Shaz Cheesman October 3, 2012 at 6:52 AM Oh really enjoyed reading this Rommy, it speaks volumes - Shaz