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Slamming Doors

The sound of anger is a silent one, Don’t you know? A deaf tone ringing, Vibrating then nothing An alliteration of explosive hollow emotions Replete with intoxicating truths Words exchanged broke these smiles But are meaningless before doors slam Slamee or slammer does it matter? For after these doors slam We say what we mean Ronny Madonsela 22/09/2012

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/5/2012 5:40:00 PM

provoactive and blasting work, ronny.. silent waters run deep!.. wowie! :) huggs

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/1/2012 4:20:00 PM

deep with emotion Ronny, a well written poem,, really holds the reader...

Kash Poet

Date: 10/30/2012 8:38:00 PM

An insightful write here Ronny.Enjoyed the read.

Holly Moore

Date: 10/30/2012 4:49:00 PM

How true..I think you say what you mean when you are angry, unfortunately..great imagery..Thanks for commenting on my poems....Holly Moore

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/30/2012 1:44:00 PM

power-pack verse, pace... i was there from dtart to finish; wow!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2012 8:12:00 AM

very interesting the way you portrayed human emotion and fighting in this poem, Ronny. I liked this one.

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/20/2012 5:10:00 PM

Yep! Anger can be soooo silent, at which point it may be worse that the noise. Great write Ron. Thanks for visiting and love your hearty comment. One love. Joy Wells

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/17/2012 7:14:00 PM

oh this is so true...made me think of times i heard doors slamming, and no words were needed....great write!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/17/2012 8:52:00 AM

Ah, how painful silence can be and yes, anger can be so silent and say so much, it can tear the soul--- I really like this, Ronny...I have been trying to write a poem on silence as well, hopefully I can finish it soon-- you have managed to wrap up silence with a few lines...thank you btw for passing by my poem, glad you like it...

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/14/2012 7:18:00 PM

Thisshows that we don't handle ange it handles us. A lot of emotion in this one Ronny; can't wait to make up! :)

Chidozie Uche O.

Date: 10/10/2012 1:33:00 AM

Slamming doors is symbolical, I know of muggers slamming doors, police too does that, angry husband or wife, young people also, representing vexed spirit of different kind of people....... Doors are being slammed when those wonderful smiles go away. Nice poem.....

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/6/2012 3:07:00 PM

Well written Ronny... very intense! Hugs, Jack XOX

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2012 2:13:00 PM

Powerful poem Ronny - Have a lovely weekend. - xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/3/2012 9:26:00 AM

ronny, been a while.. so glad i clicked on this page... that ending is great, with the honest portrayal of a tiff blocking love's view... really great stuff...:) huggs!

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 10/3/2012 6:52:00 AM

Oh really enjoyed reading this Rommy, it speaks volumes - Shaz