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Slammin On...Step Up and Lose

I read this little challenge,step up and lose, a so-called villain lookin' to be abused i'm your Randy Johnson,you're my John Kruk high and tight words dude,ya better duck, step up to my plate with your childish hate heat seeking fastballs will settle your fate who at the soup do you deem unworthy when the phrase you exclaim appears to be blurry STEP UP AND LOSE...sure'nuff if you choose better grab your crotch,before them fastballs turn BLUE.... :).......hey,that was kinda fun !!!

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/14/2010 4:50:00 PM

I am not sure that I like slammin. It certainly is a different form. I told my oldest son about slam on the soup. He said, why not mom it is a form of expression and that is what you do is express yourself. I think he was telling me I am an old fuddy duddy. Must start thinking openly. God Bless Phyl

John Rhinem

Date: 8/14/2010 3:01:00 AM

~ Smile, "My Man" ~ "I Love You Brother; Just Like I Do Every Life That Was Ever Born!!!" ~ "Have A Beautiful Day My Friend," John!" ~ Smile, I do not know why but, somehow I believe that You already know what I just told You !? And "Yes, 'Prophecy'" coming again...."Bye Jay; Love You My Friend!":) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 8/14/2010 2:55:00 AM

Smile ~ "Sweet!" ~ How are You my dear old friend? Well I truly hope! And "Thank You" for Your com; appreciated! Smile, now, about this slam? Don't know who its for but, speaking for myself -- My writes as somehow I believe given our history You should know!? Have Always been geared towards darkness' sorrows upon humanity and Never towards humanity itself.... ~ Cont:)