Jay Del Fierro Poet Free verse

Slammin On...Step Up and Lose

I read this little challenge,step up and lose,
a so-called villain lookin' to be abused
i'm your Randy Johnson,you're my John Kruk
high and tight words dude,ya better duck,
step up to my plate with your childish hate
heat seeking fastballs will settle your fate
who at the soup do you deem unworthy
when the phrase you exclaim appears to be blurry
STEP UP AND LOSE...sure'nuff if you choose
better grab your crotch,before them fastballs turn BLUE....


:).......hey,that was kinda fun !!!

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Phyllis Babcock August 14, 2010 at 4:50 PM I am not sure that I like slammin. It certainly is a different form. I told my oldest son about slam on the soup. He said, why not mom it is a form of expression and that is what you do is express yourself. I think he was telling me I am an old fuddy duddy. Must start thinking openly. God Bless Phyl

John Rhinem August 14, 2010 at 3:01 AM ~ Smile, "My Man" ~ "I Love You Brother; Just Like I Do Every Life That Was Ever Born!!!" ~ "Have A Beautiful Day My Friend," John!" ~ Smile, I do not know why but, somehow I believe that You already know what I just told You !? And "Yes, 'Prophecy'" coming again...."Bye Jay; Love You My Friend!":) ~

John Rhinem August 14, 2010 at 2:55 AM Smile ~ "Sweet!" ~ How are You my dear old friend? Well I truly hope! And "Thank You" for Your com; appreciated! Smile, now, about this slam? Don't know who its for but, speaking for myself -- My writes as somehow I believe given our history You should know!? Have Always been geared towards darkness' sorrows upon humanity and Never towards humanity itself.... ~ Cont:)