Slam Rude Health Mum Slam God Dam the Matriarch Got Old Slam

True Story

Today was Doctor's visit
No 3

You see my Mum now struggles walking

Where as 6 month's ago she walked
more than me like she was 23

And 3 visits later seen by 3 different
Doctor's

Where are we at now ?

She resembles her actual age of 70
rather than her old sprightly 23 

She still work's a 5 day week
6am till 4pm Monday to Friday

And yes she wants to carry on
but unfortunately without medical
help the game is up

But after 3 visits with 3 different Doctor's she is no better off

Confined to a walking stick and
good Samaritans who help
a temporary solution at best with
2 week's off with a Doctor's note

Leaving armed with the knowledge 
nothing fixed the problem still persists

Her employment sanity and independence at stake 

And after appointment and Doctor
No 3 

Not a single pill hope nor resolution
to hang on 2

Might as well just have taken 2
Paracetamol as a Placebo

Must be scary at 70 year's old
when you ask but receive no help

Because what is the alternative

When there is no where left to turn next

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/18/2019 1:36:00 AM
very scary. this is where family support is very important and strong love and commitment to a parent prevails.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/18/2019 1:09:00 PM
Very very scary L.L. Because what you said is so so true regarding the word you used COMMITMENT. And what in Real Terms that actually means. Honestly i am neither Prepared and definitely not the right person for this particular job sadly. Cheers L.L ta and thank you for putting things into perspective much and greatly appreciated
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