SLAM DUNK

Although I'm in a grim never ending funk,
Rising like the Phoenix will be a slam dunk.
I want to free myself of the sadness,
Rise above all the noise and the madness.
My goal is soar above the galaxy and stars,
no longer a prisoner behind invisible  bars.
If I don't shake off this profound abyss,
I will in turn forfeit a life of pure bliss.

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Joseph May

Date: 8/15/2024 5:33:00 PM

"Rising like the phoenix and soaring above the madness", A positive write Alexis, soup mail

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/15/2024 5:37:00 PM

Hi Joesph, I appreciate that you stopped by with such a comment. Off to read the soup mail now. Have a nice day-Alexis

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/24/2024 5:00:00 PM

Alexis I know exactly how it is to feel the way you say you do, I haven’t been right since my husband was so very ill, although it’s two years on it seems my old old self has gone. I smile even though my heart is aching, smiles help a lot… Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/23/2024 3:37:00 PM

You are a strong girl and I know you can get through this. Wish we were nearer id pop round all the time for cup of Joe or a nice cup of earl grey tea or take you out for a pizza or find a funny movie to see,anything to see you become a little happier again. know you are strong, it seems impossible now but you will come through all this grief. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/11/2024 3:04:00 AM

I can feel that strong spirit in you dear heart, the fighter that never gives up. The soul is very potent Alexis, it will not let us give up and thank God for that. I will be praying and rooting for you, all the way, have a precious day filled with gratitude and love above all else. Love for self and others, xo

Bill Baker

Date: 4/10/2024 7:00:00 PM

Great to have you back, Alexis. I like the tone of this poem. You can do it and we miss you and your poetry. Hugs, from a poet friend in Texas, Bill

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/10/2024 8:45:00 AM

Dear Alexis, What a powerful declaration of resilience and determination. Despite the challenges and the weight of sadness, your words ignite a spark of hope. The imagery of rising like a Phoenix and soaring above the chaos speaks volumes about your strength and ambition. Keep pushing forward, for within you lies the ability to break free and embrace a life of boundless joy and fulfillment. - Blessings, Daniel