Slain Detained and Loops

Slain Tamed and Loops
 
 
Why must you stare,
So persistent
So arrogant
Without a hand to hold
As I have been pulled in closely
By a summer rose
Knowing how lovely
How lonely
How solid
I tend to be
 
Make my soul quiver
Standing so vulnerable to your every touch.
Watching your body sway from left to right
Lifting lightly a finger to lay your message across my lip
 
Gentle
Warm
Clear
You spoke
As I troubled my steps over murky water
How dare you
Glare and steal my mesmerized eye
So blind to love
And stained with impurities
 
I want more
Every day
I crave your heart
Your mind
Your body
Your soul
I want every single piece of you
 
Reduce me to your mirrors
May I only be a reflection
Of known heartaches
Stolen memories
Graceful whips
And swords of strength
 
What lies inside
A broken glass
Peering to the other side.
I’ve become stifled.
To your sprit
Every time distance is slim
How does this mountain keep me still
difficult to climb
(shakes)
I fall
Yet I wont give up
 
What dying spirit I have
Before I have been wiped away
With the winds of shame
Walking through a door of revolution
And into a dragon rose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/27/2016 10:11:00 PM
Ram, well done. LINDA
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Date: 7/24/2016 7:28:00 PM
Sad to hear that ..however awesome poem..skat
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Date: 7/24/2016 6:31:00 PM
What a tremendous write Ram...Welcome to the soup.
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