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“Stop pushing so hard” “I can't take the pressure” I heard someone say just the other day “I really feel that I should do this... but I'm pulled the other way” As if we are caught in a web of our making all tangled up in each others strings Twisted and manipulated into certain duties when our efforts would be better spent on more important things Judging, demanding not understanding we all have struggles we don't always share And sometimes- just sometimes we need understanding a fragment of empathy compassion or care So lean back, stop pushing stop pulling those strings and exercise some feeling and kindness it brings Cut each other slack and loosen the tension for we are all struggling to just keep our heads Yes, gently throw down a few extra life-lines for we are all hanging by various threads

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/10/2018 1:26:00 AM
Hi Rhona, A beautiful poem and so absolutely true. We feel obligated to do what others persuade us to do, and sometimes go along with the flow to keep the peace, we don't stop and ask ourselves - what about me and what I want for a change?) Well done Best wishes, Jennifer
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/10/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment! ...and best wishes to you, too! ;)
Date: 11/9/2018 9:01:00 PM
So telling, insightful and true, especially this part: "Judging, demanding not understanding we all have struggles we don't always share" You always rise to the occasion and AMAZE me!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/10/2018 7:29:00 AM
Thank you, my friend- you've made my muse strut around all puffed up & haughty this morning!! ;D
Date: 11/9/2018 4:47:00 PM
Yes absolutely, Rhona. "Cut each other slack". Well done.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/9/2018 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Line!! ;)
Date: 11/9/2018 12:27:00 PM
People weave their webs to make their life more interesting and - like spiders - suddenly discover opposing elements make it too difficult to control, so well thought out and executed, Rhona! Aloha! Rico
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/9/2018 6:24:00 PM
Thank you for the kind & thoughtful comment, Rico! Aloha! ;)

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