Skyward 81

child on a swing souring skyward - frozen mountain peak slices through iced clouds

mountainsmonoku

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Christina Bowring

February 4, 2024 at 3:46 PM

This is such a beautiful Monoku dear Wen. The picture is quite fascinating isn’t it and pairs so well with the poem.Absolutely love, ‘ frozen mountain peak slices through iced clouds’ - what imagery - gorgeously poetic! Loved this one. Great depth. Blessings dear one xx

Speaks Volumes

February 6, 2024 at 8:04 AM

Thanks so much Chris. You are too kind ! (but its appreciated) :) Wen

Sam Scott

January 30, 2024 at 8:46 PM

There is something hauntingly beautiful about this poetic image that speaks to my heart x (fav)

Speaks Volumes

January 30, 2024 at 9:38 PM

its so very simple Sam, but I love it too. There's an affinity between the child soaring through the air, reaching heights, and the the mountain seemingly growing so high, it slices through clouds. Thank you Sam for taking my words with you, into your heart. With respect from Wen.

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