Phyllis Babcock Poet Free verse

Skyward

full orange round moon
circle illuminating view
night darkness
shining light
sphere brightened canopy
lighting earths crust below
stars twinkling bright
diamond  heavenly bodies
pulsating harmoniously
sprinkling star dust
 in orbital swing
eyes drift skyward

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Judy Ball November 18, 2011 at 8:02 PM I do love walking in the wee hours of the morning when all is still and quiet. You can hear the sounds of the night creatures as they scurry about and watch the diamond studded sky, Nice job. God Bless, JB

Carolyn Devonshire November 10, 2011 at 10:35 AM On a night such as this, who can take their eyes off the skies, Phyllis. Beautiful description of a starlit evening! Love, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley November 4, 2011 at 7:27 PM How could we not look and see that mysterious lady. You do a wonderful write describing the mystery of night. Lovely Phyllis

Andrea Dietrich November 2, 2011 at 8:50 PM Thanks for all your lovely comments to me today. Let me see if I can find any poem of yours I have not yet seen. Maybe I will reread an oldie!

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2011 at 7:53 PM wow, phyllis. You did wonders with this moon poem. Is it for that one contest on writing about the moon? Or did that one get judged already? well, I always love to see you posting something new. Luv,Andrea