Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Sky's Love To Ocean

longest and deepest
                                      symbolize to be broadest 
                                         sky's love to ocean
 
                                         as they are lovers
                                 embrace each other's blue hue
                                         unison of hearts

                                     one smiles upper side
                                    other replies reflection 
                                         up to end level




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Manmath Dalei April 26, 2016 at 1:51 PM One of the best haiku I ever read.Excellent n brilliant write............with love Bl Devnath April 26, 2016 at 4:06 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation. Loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian August 3, 2015 at 10:16 AM :) Congrats on being chosen POTD with this lovely string of haiku, BL...beautiful union of two lovers as seen in nature. Hugs Bl Devnath August 3, 2015 at 1:43 PM Thanks my lovely friend for wishing me congratulation and for beautiful comment. Loved always,bl

Yolanda Scott July 26, 2015 at 10:16 PM Romaticlally beautiful write!!! Congratulations!!! Bl Devnath July 29, 2015 at 2:12 PM Many thanks my lovely friend for wishing me congratulation with beautiful comment. Loved always,bl

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 26, 2015 at 4:29 PM Beautiful haikus, BL! Congrats to you and hugs, Rhonda Bl Devnath July 29, 2015 at 2:11 PM Many thanks my lovely friend for wishing me congratulation with beautiful comment. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2015 at 1:34 PM - Dear friend Bl, a wonderful poem! - I'm so glad that this was chosen as p.o.t.d. - Congratulations !!!! - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2015 at 1:52 PM - Really well deserved !!!! Bl Devnath July 26, 2015 at 1:51 PM Oh! my God, i never thought of this great honor. My small heart respires for the biggest hearts of you P.S. Thanks for wishing me congratulation my lovely lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 1:06 PM dropping back with my congrats so delighted for you with the honour of poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx Bl Devnath July 26, 2015 at 1:28 PM It's a dream like for me which i never thought. It's a great honor you all the P.S. given me with love. Thanks for wishing me congratulation and for re-visit. Loved always,bl

Kp Nunez July 26, 2015 at 11:03 AM Beauty in economy of words. Congratulations on having this poem chosen as POTD, BL! hugs! Bl Devnath July 26, 2015 at 11:18 AM Oh! my God, i never thought of this wonderful gift. Thanks for wishing me congratulation my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Gary Bateman July 26, 2015 at 10:32 AM BL, A Brilliant Write here!! Congratulations on POTD!! Great Work . . . Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary Bl Devnath July 26, 2015 at 10:56 AM Oh! my God, i never thought of this wonderful gift. Thanks for wishing me congratulation my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Richard Lamoureux July 26, 2015 at 9:11 AM Congratulations on being chosen for this great honour! Bl Devnath July 26, 2015 at 11:25 AM Oh! my God, i never thought of this great honor. My small heart respires for the biggest hearts of you P.S. Thanks for wishing me congratulation my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Eve Roper July 26, 2015 at 9:10 AM Beautiful romantic write congratulations on you poem of the day a 7. Hugs eve Bl Devnath July 26, 2015 at 11:26 AM Oh! my God, i never thought of this great honor. My small heart respires for the biggest hearts of you P.S. Thanks for wishing me congratulation and for your lovely 7, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Casarah Nance July 26, 2015 at 6:00 AM What wonders love and nature hold together, well done, and a magnificent display for the poem of the day :) Bl Devnath July 26, 2015 at 11:27 AM Oh! my God, i never thought of this great honor. My small heart respires for the biggest hearts of you P.S. Thanks for wishing me congratulation my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 5:40 PM such amazing imagery BL - skies love to the ocean - going into my faves I LOVE this:-) hugs jan xx 7 Bl Devnath July 25, 2015 at 12:42 PM Thanks my lovely friend for stopping by on my poem and for selecting as your favorite along your sweet 7. Loved always,bl

Afolabi Muideen July 24, 2015 at 5:19 PM A wonderful write here, so lovely...excellence.........A.M. Bl Devnath July 25, 2015 at 12:43 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your wonderful comment. Loved always,bl

Robert Heemstra July 24, 2015 at 2:50 PM The sea and the sky are so much alike and how you were able to put that into words is an act like no other. Thank you. Bl Devnath July 24, 2015 at 4:18 PM Thanks a lot for stopping by on my poem my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Ovidiu Bocsa July 24, 2015 at 1:59 PM Wonderful poetical plaything and love of life.Congrat. Bl Devnath July 24, 2015 at 2:30 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always,bl