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Skylark Dreams

On the other side where the dark resides there are skylarks in the night While our children sleep they bring dreams to keep, sunlit rainbows, in their flight With soft wings, they fly cooing lullabies, soothing babies in their beds For each precious child, dreamland is compiled, gently laced with pastel threads
_____________________________________________ Submitted for Dr. Ram's Contest: Alouettee "Skylark" 8/5/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/23/2014 1:01:00 PM
a unique one and very creative. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/23/2014 7:51:00 AM
Lovely thoughts, melodies of these birds, well done :)
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Date: 8/22/2014 10:26:00 PM
soft touch for the sleeping, dreaming babies.Carrie, congrats for fine win. Mohan
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:33:00 PM
Lovely lullaby, Carrie....love "gently laced with pastel threads." Congratulations.
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Date: 8/22/2014 3:41:00 PM
I don't see many lullaby poems. This one is lovely, as all of yours are. Cheers, Roy
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Date: 8/22/2014 10:02:00 AM
Oh Carrie, this is lovely. Congrats!! BG
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:04:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and my congrats on your 2nd Place win, Carrie
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Date: 8/6/2014 8:17:00 PM
Very colorful bedtime song for a child to drift off to sleep with. Great meter and rhyme, Carrie. Very much enjoyed it... Robert.
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Date: 8/6/2014 8:01:00 AM
Rhis poem is like a beautiful lullaby in itself dear Carrie..big hug
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Date: 8/6/2014 1:17:00 AM
A very pretty poem.....end rhyme is clear, but I also like your "secret internal rhyme" in the spelling of lullabies/babies and dark/skylarks and soothing/cooing ....well done Carrie
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Date: 8/5/2014 10:27:00 PM
Very lovely and serene is ur sweet write Carrie! sure to fly to top,, good luck to u!
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Date: 8/5/2014 9:43:00 PM
Sure reads like a winner to me. Best of luck in the contest. I did not enter it. Now reducing my entries to contests that are judged blind. If they do not stipulate no names submitted with contest entries then I WILL NOT ENTER.
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